Looks GREAT Whimsy!
What did you straighten your hair with?
I used a flat iron for the first time on Sat. but it's not as straight as I thought it would be. I was tempted to let my stylist flat iron with the Marcel but was too scared when I saw the oven was RED hot.
When you used your flatiron did you do the comb chase method? that seems to work well for some people.
did you use small sections of hair? did you do just one pass very s-l-o-w-l-y down the length of hair? those 2 things work well for me. But you get better at things the more you do em so try again and i bet it'll look straighter each time you do it.